Monday, 25 July 2011

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Journey through every day,
Shouldering a great burden,
Grow tall and strong; carry it with pride,
Over time be overcome by it's tremendous weight,
Show any weakness and be crushed,
Cave in and be lost
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24 comments:

  1. A.25 July 2011 at 00:24

    What a curious metric :D

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  2. T Papar25 July 2011 at 00:39

    i like it

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  3. poorfags25 July 2011 at 01:31

    Nice.

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  4. Dan Carter25 July 2011 at 02:35

    makes me want to take english literature at a level :D wow

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  5. Admin25 July 2011 at 03:34

    Very nice mate, enjoying these daily posts! This could be on a motivational poster or somehting

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  6. my day in a sentence25 July 2011 at 03:58

    I googled it up 'cause I though it was a published poem. Not bad!

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  7. Sub Radar (Mike)25 July 2011 at 09:46

    Good advice in poem format, nice.

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  8. Hans Knecht25 July 2011 at 11:09

    very good

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  9. Jay25 July 2011 at 15:21

    makes a lot of sense.

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  10. Anonymous25 July 2011 at 15:56

    Nice, you can tell you put a lot of thought into it.

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  11. Eli25 July 2011 at 17:13

    I liked it! Keep it up! :)

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  12. Fallow26 July 2011 at 00:55

    Was kinda mucking around with the others (getting more serious as I went)glad you liked it :)

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  13. Dan Carter26 July 2011 at 00:57

    you can tell you've changed slightly. for the better definately

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  14. Sketchar26 July 2011 at 04:27

    Wow pretty neat man, keep it up.

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  15. Spader26 July 2011 at 06:18

    Good stuff there! Looking forward to more in the future

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  16. MrCoolPants26 July 2011 at 06:30

    nice, pretty well written

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  17. Unknown26 July 2011 at 06:40

    nice! :)

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  18. Mekkor26 July 2011 at 08:05

    you are good with words... wish i would be, too.

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  19. Come At Me Bro26 July 2011 at 17:25

    This is great!

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  20. Elliot MacLeod-Michael26 July 2011 at 21:37

    wow, kind of depressing but I liked it!
    +followed

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  21. SillyPhotoStorys26 July 2011 at 23:30

    I almost cried.

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  22. pv27 July 2011 at 08:20

    that was such a sad but yet good one

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  23. Diego Sousa27 July 2011 at 10:53

    that's some talent! nice blog btw! +followed

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  24. poorfags28 July 2011 at 07:32

    cool poem bro

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