Monday 25 July 2011

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Journey through every day,
Shouldering a great burden,
Grow tall and strong; carry it with pride,
Over time be overcome by it's tremendous weight,
Show any weakness and be crushed,
Cave in and be lost

24 comments:

  1. What a curious metric :D

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  2. makes me want to take english literature at a level :D wow

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  3. Very nice mate, enjoying these daily posts! This could be on a motivational poster or somehting

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  4. I googled it up 'cause I though it was a published poem. Not bad!

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  5. Good advice in poem format, nice.

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  6. Nice, you can tell you put a lot of thought into it.

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  7. I liked it! Keep it up! :)

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  8. Was kinda mucking around with the others (getting more serious as I went)glad you liked it :)

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  9. you can tell you've changed slightly. for the better definately

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  10. Wow pretty neat man, keep it up.

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  11. Good stuff there! Looking forward to more in the future

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  12. you are good with words... wish i would be, too.

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  13. wow, kind of depressing but I liked it!
    +followed

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  14. that was such a sad but yet good one

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  15. that's some talent! nice blog btw! +followed

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